Saturday, October 15, 2011

Her first love

He is the first man every little girl falls in love with.
A man who’s place can never be taken by another.
Throughout her life, in all her relationships, he is the One
She compares everyone to… nobody quite matches up.
One day she meets someone she wants to spend her life with,
She marries, moves away, but remains ‘Daddy’s Little Girl’.
She has children of her own, loves them more than life itself,
But he remains Number One.

And then, one day, he passes on. Gone forever, never to return…
He does it so he can watch over her.

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Laura M. Campbell said...

That was beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. Thanks for sharing!

Raige Creations said...

very nice

Margot Kinberg said...

Such a lovely tribute, Natasha! Poetic!

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SRG said...

I just stumbled upon your blog. This post was (especially) lovely.



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