Footprints on the sands of time.
Of being remembered long after we are gone
As someone quite Unforgettable-
Noble, generous good and kind.
But when you actually run along the shore,
You find you leave behind you a lonely trail
Which lasts till the next wave comes along
and neatly washes it away
leaving behind, again, a pristine beach.
When my time comes to go,
All I want is to be remembered
By those who I really care about
As someone who briefly touched their lives
And left it no worse off than before.
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A drabble is a story told in exactly 100 words.
8 comments:
This is beautiful!
That's so gorgeous. Bravo!
Beautifully said.
Beautiful drabble. This has to be one of my favorites.
Pamela Jo
Well said. I think you will achieve your goal.
Natasha - I love this poem! You express so clearly what a wonderful legacy we can leave, just by being remembered by those who love us.
I love drabbles and especially this poem. Well done!
Amen!! Me too!!!
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SueAnn
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