[This is a work of fiction, and any resemblance to people alive or dead is purely coincidental.]
She attracted men like a flower does bees. One flutter of her eyelashes, one hint of a smile, and she had them where she wanted them- at her feet. She had her group of ardent admirers. But that was not enough- she wanted to collect them all.
I could have killed her when she stole my man. She had so many, why did she want the only man who had ever cared for me?
Now she is dead. Someone's murdered her. I say good riddance. But, I am the detective assigned to her case. I need to find her killer.
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15 comments:
Well darn! Now I must know who did it? Gonna tell us?
Hugs
SueAnn
Love this.
Rayna - Oh, what a delicious Drabble!! What a nice twist you've included at the end. I want to know more! Please, please expand this into a longer story...
Oh, I sure agree with everyone else. Love this and definitely want MORE, MORE (PLEASE)!
Mason
Thoughts in Progress
Great drabble! It reads like the prologue to a story!
Great twist there, Rayna!
And rumor has it you are a Tart-Twin.
That's a twist! Cool drabble, Rayna. You could be a mystery writer.
CD
Rayna, what a teaser! This is gonna bug me. You are going to grow this story, aren't you
Sounds to me like the Detective done it! (in a classic Agatha Christie-like twist)
Love it - now you just have to write the novel :)
I agree with Jemi!
Margot's right. This is a delicious drabble. Can't wait to see what you write at Brenda's place.
You need to turn this one into a novel, Rayna.
Ha! Your inner tart is showing! Nice use of innuendo in your title *snort* And brilliant little story.
@ SueAnn- if I knew, I could attempt to. But she hasn't told me much more of her story :-(
@ Kathyrin - thank you.
@ Margot- I could try to get her to tell me more, but I really have no idea if she will reveal much more.
@ Mason- I can think of dozens of people who would want to.
@ Laura- it could be, though I intended it to be stand alone.
@ Alex- thank you.
And yes, busted ;-)
@ Clarissa- I always wanted to be one, but plotting is something that is beyond me.
@ Mary- I can but try.
@ Debra- that would be a good one.
@ Jemi/ Diane- wish I could. Maybe I should make that my NaNo drabble project?
@ Kittie- what's that? Have I forgotten something?
@ Patricia- I wish I could. But something tells me I can't :-(
@ Hart- I knew you would get it!!! Inner tart? Surely not!
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